Having a quick look at the actual comic it has become very apparent that is a biographical comic, therefore when you say "This is just how I hope the story pans out in the comic!" you actually wish the main charachter to get a blow job and then make a comic about it....
I would recommend animating more relevant stories or asking the ceator of this comic if you could animate some of his work.
Seeing as it's a biographical comic what you would be doing is a moving vresion of a still image which has been taken from real moving life. What i'm saying is it's wierd to animate specificaly this comic, it's like your animating someone's life who you don't know.
Maybe you could just make your own animated comic instead.
Your style is good and apparanty you have some good ideas of what people on the internet want to see.
Sorry for being a bit long-winded.